Vision: I must say whatever you were trying to do here you hit spot on because I can not look away. No matter where my eyes go, I'm interested because of all the shapes and colors that were put into the picture. It's crazy and very surreal and interesting.
Originality: The only reason I take a star from here is because unfortunately, the idea of using all kinds of bright colors in a picture is not the most original idea to ever exist. But the way you did it here I found is really different from what everyone else is doing, so props to you.
Technique: I can see your style is very distinct and still being shaped. It's not the big head and the small body that throws me off-- the only part that lost me a little were her eyes. If you look at the whites of her eyes, they don't match, one is slightly off. Other then that I like what I see. It's cute and eye catching.
Impact: I don't imagine this could be more impacting if it tried, dear! Well done!